22May2014 slow progress

Alpha is plodding along. I'm about halfway through the rewrite and realize this thing is all over the place. I was spending way too much time scrolling back and forth thru the manuscript. Decided to go back and just straight line all the main chracters story lines. I can then drop them into the main piece in any position. I favor linear but Jason seems to be shooting for more "pulp fiction" type form.

My feeling is the latter will interrupt the flow but it's ultimately his screenplay.

What a mug huh?