Not sure if I mentioned it last time but after talking with Jason I decided not to "Kill the Priest" lol story.
He advised that I judge too harshly and to relax and write.
Good advice. The story itself is good but Priest doesn't seem to fit the lead if that makes sense.
Ive decided to change the perspective and make Chaos the main character. He seemed to be taking over anyway and frankly his perspective is more interesting than Priests at this point.
so... Here goes the umpteenth rewrite. ;)
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